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I'm tempted to throw my first original novel into the bin for several reasons:

1. Nobody's reading it.

2. I'm not sure what how to play this story out. I've planned what's gonna happen later, but I can't sum up the execution.

3. I'm thinking of moving on to writing a much better story then this. I can tell right from the get up that people are gonna feel dumbfounded by this story. Rabbits that can sing in fairy talk and speak in pseudo victorian dialogue? And It just feels to basic. Why rabbits? Why two certain rabbits, what reason for them is there to be the main characters?

If it sounds like I'm criticizing myself, it's only because it's for the best. A good writer must recognize the flaws they put into this story as someone else critiquing it is. In fact it is thanks to those critiques that I am now put in a position where I must either re-write the first two chapters or just write a new story altogether.

I just don't see this story working out, and I hypothesize that others may point out the same.

And I only got two weeks left of Fall Break before my next term and I'm put in this very brain spinning spot where I just don't know what to do.

I implore you people... prey for me.
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Troy Troodon
Artist | Hobbyist | Traditional Art
United States
I used to be on ":iconteamartists:" with a couple other guys but now I'm on my own.

I like to draw but sometimes I'm not that good. I tend to run out of ideas But I do what I can with the help I need to accomplish it.
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grimalkn Featured By Owner 17 hours ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fave, I appreciate it :)
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Krauss-Gailes Featured By Owner 17 hours ago  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for the fave on my app
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WhiteStudios Featured By Owner 18 hours ago  Student Photographer
Thanks for the fav
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Oskar-A Featured By Owner 19 hours ago
Thx for adding my plants to your collection. Did you try to download the 3d-models too?
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TriumphNVC Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Student General Artist
Thanks for adding my work to your collection, Troy. I really appreciate it! Take care.
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AciDEmiLy Featured By Owner 1 day ago  Professional General Artist
Thanks for the fave!
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koora-the-tigeress Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks for the fave
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creativesam Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Thanks for the fav!
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ButtyandDipper Featured By Owner 2 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
:-) Hi :-) thank you so much for adding our pic to your collection :-) cheers :-) have a great week :-) Butty&Dipper :-)
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JOtey Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist
Hi ^^
Thanks for the:+fav: (Terra) :)
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